Elizabeth,
I really enjoyed your imagery in this work. It made me feel as though I was in the dusty attic of someone's brain. Weather it was intentional or not the attic image stuck with me and gave me many a food for thought for my next work. I also just generally like your word choice,"dreaming of empty things" and "reading all these words and not being any closer to the point" I loved both those lines dearly. I also felt that the entire poem was a thought scrolling across someones head and I really enjoyed the style of that. Well done!
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